diff --git a/src/components/home/been-working-with.astro b/src/components/home/been-working-with.astro
index 2d81897..4c0c2b9 100644
--- a/src/components/home/been-working-with.astro
+++ b/src/components/home/been-working-with.astro
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@ import PreviousRole from "@/components/previous-role.astro";
     logo="/lateralus-logo.jpeg"
     href="https://lateralus.ventures"
   >
-    Led frontend development for Ask Chief, shaping AI product experiences with scalable interfaces
-    that could evolve alongside intelligent workflows.
+    Frontend work on Ask Chief, building interfaces for AI-powered products that needed to feel simple
+    while handling complex workflows underneath.
   </PreviousRole>
 
   <PreviousRole
@@ -19,8 +19,8 @@ import PreviousRole from "@/components/previous-role.astro";
     logo="/celonis-logo.webp"
     href="https://celonis.com"
   >
-    Built analytical product interfaces for OCPM, alongside shared component systems, build pipelines,
-    and platform foundations that helped teams move faster together.
+    Building out analytical interfaces for OCPM, a shared component library, and tooling that made it
+    easier for the whole team to ship.
   </PreviousRole>
 
   <PreviousRole
@@ -28,19 +28,13 @@ import PreviousRole from "@/components/previous-role.astro";
     logo="/lenses-logo.webp"
     href="https://lenses.io"
   >
-    <ul class="list-disc list-inside space-y-1">
-      <li>Engineered product interfaces for SQL Processors and Data Catalog.</li>
-      <li>Architected the shared components library.</li>
-      <li>Worked on developer tooling, including the CLI.</li>
-    </ul>
+    Product interfaces for SQL Processors and Data Catalog, a shared component library, and developer
+    tooling including the CLI.
   </PreviousRole>
 
   <PreviousRole company="The Chat Shop" logo="/thechatshop-logo.jpg">
-    <ul class="list-disc list-inside space-y-1">
-      <li>Spearheaded end-to-end processing architecture.</li>
-      <li>Established the company's streaming data infrastructure.</li>
-      <li>Built the operational foundations for reliable delivery and automation.</li>
-    </ul>
+    Streaming data infrastructure built from scratch, along with a processing pipeline that kept delivery
+    running reliably at scale.
   </PreviousRole>
 
   <PreviousRole
@@ -48,9 +42,7 @@ import PreviousRole from "@/components/previous-role.astro";
     logo="/commversion-logo.webp"
     href="https://commversion.com"
   >
-    <ul class="list-disc list-inside space-y-1">
-      <li>Developed the customer delivery platform and its public-facing infrastructure.</li>
-      <li>Designed and implemented the initial InstantConnect system.</li>
-    </ul>
+    Customer delivery platform and its public-facing side, plus InstantConnect, taken from design through
+    to implementation.
   </PreviousRole>
 </section>